Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Narrative Writing


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Before-In a big black shady broken  house in a street there had lived a boy named Ray Ray.Ray woke up starving.He went and searched for food but there was no food after a huge robot tore up his house and leaving cracks on his street.He went for a walk looking for food.While he was looking he heard a scream.He ran where that scream was and saw a girl screaming.Also he saw a robot the same robot that tore up Ray's street and house.Ray ran and tried to save that girl but the robot spotted him running and started charging at him.Ray Ray turned around and started running back to house. but when they were running the robot struck  it down with his big long black  arms.So then Ray Ray started running until he saw a big shiney gloden temple up a moutain. He started running to the  temple.He kept running until he found a building.He ran to that building and hid in it.But the robot could see where he was hiding.The robot was going to strike It down.Ray Ray knew what the robot was doing so he ran out quickly.And sprinted to the temple.The robot lost Ray and sent 4  mini robots after him.  

During-Ray never stop running until he saw a store that was open.He ran to that store and started eating. A few minutes he heard the mini robots coming.He hid behind the counter holding a baseball bat.The robots came looking for Ray Ray. One of the robots ordered the robots to make everything upside down. One of the robots was near the counter making a table upside down.Ray was scared and wet his pants.The robot saw Ray`s  shadow and went to it.Ray was crying and just sprinted out of the store calling for help.The robots ran after him saying “ come back’’.Ray ran to the temple without stopping.



After-While Ray Ray was running the mini robots stopped and started shooting bullets at him.Ray dodged the bullets  and kept running.He had made it to the temple and just ran into the door and hid in a closet that had weapons (golden sword's,golden shields,golden guns, golden axes,and a special golden armour that can never be broken).He tried on the armour and chose a weapon.The weapon that he chose was a a very strong golden axe and a strong shield.The Mini robots came inside looking for. “Hey” Ray said “ Lets fight”.The 4  mini robots ran to him and a furious battle raged.Ray defeated The mini robots and waited for the boss.He waited and waited until he heard a  big thump.He went and  saw who was making  the big thump. “No!”he said it the big robot.The robot ran to the temple and bumped the temple but it couldn`t fall.Ray ran down and said to the robot “bring it” The huge robot ran to Ray but while he was running tripped and fell on the ground.When the robot was on the ground Ray got his strong golden axe and chopped the robot's head off.”DIE!”.